The Poetry Thread

[Ender 8]

Here's one... not mine, but I really like it... tis about the Night Stalker helicopter squadron.

Night Stalker

?Death Waits In The Dark?

The war cry of the best,

Defender of our freedom

He?s ready for any test.

The first one in

Blazing trails through the fight,

Not one guy left behind

As he exits through the night.

The courage of 100 men

Is what he holds inside,

He does it for his fellow man

He does it for his pride.

Amidst all the heroes

He does it not for fame,

Bravery is his legacy

And NIGHTSTALKER is his name.

-Adam Bramel

[Indie-Girl 0]

recentley i really got into poetry ....yeah

so i was wondering if anyone here writes there own for fun or anything

i dont know if there is already a poem place but i cant find it if there is sooo..

this is a poem i made up last night as i went along ...tell me what you think ...

fatal attack

see, her dreams falling apart

see the crack form in her heart

someone look, see her fade

see the cuts that she has made

read the clues she left behind

hear the thought inside her mind

its not to late to bring her back

before that last fatal attack

hold her close her time is near

she will be happy never fear

remember the heart that was inside

that sweet brave girl who never cried

keep her safe and happy, till

she finds the borderline, but still

cant look back but if she will

bring her back,safe at last

before that last fatal attack

there......

[Princess 35]

The Poetry Thread

I'm gonna lock this baby up since we have the other thread, but I like your poem

[Andy 60]

or you could just merge it with the existing thread, like i just did, Prin. :p

[Princess 35]

Pfffft. I forgot that we had that function

[Andy 60]

And you call yourself an admin... :p

[Princess 35]

Hey, I do have access to all those shiney buttons on the admin panel :p

[Indie-Girl 0]

thank you , Prin for noticing the poem was there unlike mean brothers i know ....he likes it ....he told me so there :p

[Sentrosi 1]

I lie in the darkness

waiting for fear...

hoping for weakness before

i strike out from behind the shadows..

i wound quickly and it never heals

it festers until it consumes you..

and it will consume you..

i never leave shallow wounds... they go straight for your soul...

making you feel as if your losing control...

of your life..

of your mind...

and of reality.

you must accept the pain that i am...

that i give...

to accept yourself...

to live your life the way you wish

you must first live through my kiss..

what am I?

:twisted:

i wrote that one along time ago...

and this one is more recent but well here it is

This Ring

Of all the wonders in the world,

This Ring I have is unreal.

In a fleeting moment i give this ring of

gold to you.

I vow my life, my soul, and my existence to stay

by yourside, loving you with all I have

inside.

Through everything we must endure, sickness

and health, riches and poor, I promise I'll

never want anthing more.

This ring symbolizes the union of our love,

once spoken, made and now its true; we

share our love me and you.

Like this Ring a circle is made unending

love and devotion what we trade.

I love you now like never before and i vow

to be with you for all my days

I Do, with This Ring.

[Indie-Girl 0]

they are cool i especially like the second one as its really sweet yay welldone :p

[Sentrosi 1]

well it is for my gf and she still likes it... tho i have to get the ring now so i kinda fubarred my self on that one

[Ayingel 24]

I try so hard

To trust you like I do

And I do

Sometimes I wonder

Never often.

If you are good

You hardly slip

But then I wonder

Tonight what you said

Didn?t feel right

I know you well

You know this too

I know you well

But at times I wonder

You know yourself

Better than I know you now

And I want to know more

But when your mistakes are seen by me

I wonder

Once you said

?What I do is okay?

There are times that it isn?t, tho

Like now?or anytime

I guess, I guess?

Hypocrite.

You tell me I can?t

But I try not to be jealous

When you forget me for them

Friends, I understand

Family, no question

But you said it,

And I caught it

I hate being jealous

But I hate being lonesome

Agap? it may be

But is it always?

Your first answer was more true to me

?I?m sorry?

You catch it at times

But not always

You need some work yet

I know your roots?excuses!?

(The word whispered inside)

And I understand the ties

But do you understand?

I lied.

I have lied to you

When I tell you I am okay,

I?m not always

But you must know that.

?I?m sorry.?

I?ll never, ever

Stop loving you

You are mine and the world will know

And maybe now you see

?Under appreciated, over-looked?

I am truly going crazy?

--Over you?

--Please make me wonder less

I want to see you

I need to see you

Only you, the one I love

This is my confession of a lover

[Sentrosi 1]

i know you lie and its ok it really is...

it doesnt bother me that you dont tell me what really is

going on...

or whats bothering you or tell me staight whats on you mind

or if ive done something wrong...

i dont say anyof this bothers me and i really try hard not to push thinking

maybe in time you will reveal what i already know is there

[Ayingel 24]

i don't know what to say

there are times i just need to feel love

more than what you show

this would be mended

if we could be together again

and forever

but these things are too hard at times

this is why i need you

why i need to be with you

if i didn't have you i couldn't be here now

if only you could be with me now

maybe if we could be together now

maybe if things were better now

but i have you

and i want you here

[Sentrosi 1]

sometimes its hard to read your mind....

you write sometimes so cryptically expecting me to understand the words you write to me

and i wonder other times why you just cant speak to me... tell me whats on your mind...

i know you try... but at times it seems as if i know nothing of how you feel... or whats going on in your head...

[Ayingel 24]

i don't mean to

and you know i try

sometimes they only flow this way

if verse be my only voice then let it be...

it is my way...

[Sentrosi 1]

i don't know what to say

there are times i just need to feel love

more than what you show

this would be mended

if we could be together again

and forever

but these things are too hard at times

this is why i need you

why i need to be with you

if i didn't have you i couldn't be here now

if only you could be with me now

maybe if we could be together now

maybe if things were better now

but i have you

and i want you here

I wish that i could hold you when i wake in the mornings... showing you howmuch i care... these times apart kill me, rip me into shreads... we both hate being apart... but at least we are closer than we were, things could be worse... but i understand... I need you too, I need you here... I love you... maybe we will get that time soon... maybe...

[Ayingel 24]

i don't know what to say

there are times i just need to feel love

more than what you show

this would be mended

if we could be together again

and forever

but these things are too hard at times

this is why i need you

why i need to be with you

if i didn't have you i couldn't be here now

if only you could be with me now

maybe if we could be together now

maybe if things were better now

but i have you

and i want you here

I wish that i could hold you when i wake in the mornings... showing you howmuch i care... these times apart kill me, rip me into shreads... we both hate being apart... but at least we are closer than we were, things could be worse... but i understand... I need you too, I need you here... I love you... maybe we will get that time soon... maybe...

if only the barrires of time didn't exist

then i could cherish my love with the smile of one kiss

things will be renewed

it may just take time

the patience we need

we'll find inside

[Sentrosi 1]

patience against this ever present evil, time...

it sucks the life from things killing them slowly.

and yet we think we beat it... saying well i have more, ill do it later..

and in the end we rush thinking only if i had more... but it cant be beaten tamed or otherwise controlled... so we are at the mercy of this silent killer, the murderer who takes lives daily and gives other nothing back in turn...

patience she says against that evil... now that truly is a virtue...

*as they say love conquers all*

[SoftballJedi 0]

Friendship

I know you have heard

Things like this by me

Before.

But this is different.

I don?t want to do

This the rest of my life.

I want to change this too.

I hope I can. I?m honestly thinking I can.

I just want you all to know this.

I don?t like being so serious,

I want to be funny and care-free

I just can?t, it?s not my way (yet)

All I?ve been telling you,

Is the truth.

But I left out one detail.

I?m jealous of all of you.

At times, I wish I could be like you.

I?m so serious and I always worry.

I do hate it.

This may seem odd, but I don?t know how you guys do it!

You always let your opinions known,

And I never can,

I wish that will change.

I hope so.

You just do it naturally, it seems.

Is it?

This may sound corny,

But it just seems so cool.

A constant reminder comes in my mind,

I?m always the first to do so much with all of you.

I know you have heard this before,

And you are probably sick of it too.

It makes me feel alone and terrible.

I really hate it.

I?ve wanted things to change, and I?m losing hope.

I still hope it will.

Can it? I really hope it will.

Whenever any of my friends ask me to hang out with them,

It makes me feel so much better.

To know I?m not alone.

You are all the best people I?ve ever met.

You?ve helped me so much,

And I hope we can stay friends forever.

I hope you think so too.

[Ayingel 24]

The Nights and Mornings (Without You)

I wait up nights

Just to see the stars

I count them all

And wish on each one

For you to remember my love

I sleep each night

Knowing that my wish is granted

That you always know I am here,

That you know I love you

And when I wake each morning,

I feel your love around me

Even if you are so far away

But it is a good feeling

And I can't wait for it to come every time

[Sentrosi 1]

I lie awake in the murky darkness,

trying to picture your smiling face,

just one last time today please oh god please

i beg of you let me see her...

the vision is cloudy at first as I drift to sleep

and then it clears and an all knowing smile

spreads on your lips as i fall into the darkness of night

and the depths of my dreams, you are there substance

you are what makes them real,

I need you tonight,

but you arent here... my dreams will never do

and these fleeting glimpses as i fall asleep hurt

they tear at my core, longing for more than a glimpse,

just you, only you, my love my only,

and yet you are not here...

sometimes the others try to creap in, where your face belongs

first the one, then the others, all trying to steal my mind away from you,

and i battle with them as they force themselves ahead, but your sweet singing voice rings through them all, shattering them in their existence as you come floating by, a simple wink and a smile and your there... laying next to me

smiling just there, all is well... then you start to fade... i try to hold you but you disappear from my arms, and the world evaporates into reality ... im lying there as the cat stirs abit from his sleep... staring at me as if im insane... beckoning me to go back to sleep... as he begins his slow song.. relaxing me as it vibrates through me... slowly but surely i drift back to sleep not to have a dream at all...

with out you here i am empy, i am lost, return to me my love and i will never have to dream again... my sweet angel... my sweet angel in my dreams....

[Ayingel 24]

i just wish you didn't have to go through that

i wish i were there

i wish for no consequences

i had hoped no one would care

things will work

and i will be there soon

just time is all we need

the killer, as you said,

is our only friend this time

our only help

our only source of hope

until then we wait, and will waste away

until then we hope, and see what we can

the time may not help now

but it will in the end

[SoftballJedi 0]

One Look

I?ll never forget that single day.

When I sent a simple look

your way.

How could I forget?

It changed my life forever

and I think it was a good thing.

So simple, yet so powerful.

I never thought one look could be that way.

You turned around,

and looked at me.

You just sent a look at me.

Nothin? too big, could almost just be counted for as a glance.

But it wasn?t just any glance.

It was something more.

You were always calm and self-confident.

Maybe too confident.

But you looked confused.

I think I was too.

Something was different.

It was something I hadn?t felt before.

Like I died and came back to life.

An entirely new life.

Like I shined in your eyes.

And I was the only one who would ever shine in your eyes.

It was the first time we met, the first time you looked at me and the first time I looked at you but it didn?t matter. I knew the truth, did you?

Because of that one look you sent me.

I think it changed both of our lives forever.

[Sentrosi 1]

No worries

No worries My love, all will be fine,

I will dry your tears, for all time

No worries My dear, Ill be there soon

to hold you where you belong

No worries My Ayingel, your smurf is here

never fear, I will protect you

No worries My Lily, the time is finally at hand

where we may be hand in hand...

Forever on this journey as long as we live

I will be yours and you will be mine, our hearts exchanged,

Our Souls rejoice, this union we have so true.

No worries forever, as long as i have you.