Drake 53 Posted August 11, 2007 For any of those who have seen/read the fan work posted in here, this thread is for you to post feedback, comments, or kudos to the authors. It's just so that the fic threads themselves don't get bogged down with comments. I know that I like hearing feedback on stuff that I do and I'm sure the other authors and artists do as well! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rogue 4 Posted August 12, 2007 Drake, your story ewoking rocks. Write more now! :p Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Drake 53 Posted August 13, 2007 You too! And I love your title! I'm still unsure if I want to keep 'Force Flight Alpha'. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Chickenman 9 Posted August 13, 2007 Rogue, "Grayscale" looks like it has a lot of promise. I can't wait to see how it fleshes out. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rogue 4 Posted August 13, 2007 Awww....that's why you're my favorite flight-detrimented bird! :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Chickenman 9 Posted August 13, 2007 Thanks. I think. :???: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mara 29 Posted August 13, 2007 Actually, I don't mind comments in the thread itself, but here is fine, too. If I ever have time, I'll read your guys' stories. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mara 29 Posted August 14, 2007 I do have a question though, if you guys ever read Part One of Full Circle... Does the ending seemed rushed? I know I finished it in a hurry, so I'm wondering if you can tell by reading it... If it's a big problem I'll add to it now, otherwise I'll fix it when I finish the whole thing. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rogue 4 Posted August 14, 2007 If I ever have time I'll read your story and let you know. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mara 29 Posted August 14, 2007 Aye, time is a biggie, lol. I want to read yours sometime as well, but I just need some time. Maybe some morning if I get up early or something. It's partly why I split up part one of my own story... 'cause it was just getting too long, lol. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rogue 4 Posted August 14, 2007 Great post Drake! What an intruiguing set of scenarios and Masters. It's really developing into a great, well-balanced story! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Drake 53 Posted August 14, 2007 (edited) Why thank you, my dear! I'm loving your story, as well! :D Edited August 14, 2007 by Drake Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Drake 53 Posted August 15, 2007 So I can't seem to post on my own story...I can post everywhere else but there! Then I get an internal server error! BAH! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Andy 60 Posted August 15, 2007 So I can't seem to post on my own story...I can post everywhere else but there! Then I get an internal server error! BAH! We've had this problem before... I presume you are using the old copy and paste method? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Drake 53 Posted August 15, 2007 I wrote up the post in the reply window itself. I copied it to a Word doc beforehand because that was the smart thing to do, then i hit post and got the error. Every time after that, it was pasted from the doc. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mara 29 Posted August 15, 2007 The server must not like your story. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rogue 4 Posted August 15, 2007 Maybe if you actually read his story you wouldn't have that opinion. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mara 29 Posted August 15, 2007 I never said I didn't like it. I said the server. Plus, it was a joke. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mara 29 Posted August 16, 2007 Okay, Rogue, I read yours... It's intriguing... different cultures interest me, lol. And I'm assuming that's what this is about.. the Daan and the .. I forget. I figure they are just different cultural groups of humans, not completely different species. And I like the small details, like earlier where you mention the rodent scurrying away. Things like that that don't seem important, but really bring life and reality to a story. Oh. and..... I think the last part of your story, repeats, lol. I'll say more later, I'm just really tired right now. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Drake 53 Posted August 16, 2007 So...I narrowed my post down, previewing the things paragraph by paragraph until I came across one that brought up the error. Then I previewed the paragraph after, revealing that it worked so I went back to the offending text and previewed word-by-word until, at last...I found the culprit. STUPID THING WOULDN'T LET ME POST THE WORD "FROM"!!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mara 29 Posted August 16, 2007 (edited) .... crazy. PS: Would it be easier for you guys if I put in some important characters, locations, etc. at the top? I mean it's early now, but later there'll be a lot more, lol. Oh, and I'm not sure if I like my title or not. :/ Edited August 16, 2007 by Mara Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Andy 60 Posted August 16, 2007 I've updated Last of the Jedi... added a new chapter and a bit. Also I revised a few parts of the first chapter, and it's been a while, so you might want to start again. :p Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Drake 53 Posted August 16, 2007 It's up to you really. I put a list of characters and junk at the top of mine mostly for myself to remember spellings and such. :p Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
