Mara 29 Posted August 16, 2007 (edited) I've removed this story... 1). It hasn't been read and/or commented on in a while. 2). I'll be working on it and editing it, so that I can eventually publish it. Main reason --> 3). To publish it, I can't have other "published" copies, so I'm keeping the copies of this limited right now. If you would still like to read it sometime, please PM me for a copy. : ) I would be happy to either: -- Send a link to my Fiction Press page - http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2479022/1/Not_What_It_Seems -- E-mail it as a Word doc. attachment. Depends on which is easier for you to read. Comments can stay in this thread, though.. so others who may read in the future can comment. : ) Okay. Yes. I know this is really rough... and I know the ending is sudden...with the solution and all. But I was having a mind blank and just wanted to end it, lol. I wrote this a few months ago as a challenge. Any thoughts on how to fix/expand this.. I'm am so open to them. Edited July 10, 2008 by Mara Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
